Kairi: draw again!

Obviously the improvement is grand and the two are of no comparison. The structures and anatomy is what's most noticeably improved, since the original was a traditional work I can't really comment on the coloring. As for the new version alone, a few little details look a bit amateur despite your overall skill. The line art on the skirt is still really simple and could use more flow and folds. The tail also consists of just a few transcending lines of highlights, but no real defined hairs/fur. It could use some more detail. I'd also recommend to shape the fur with darker tones of the tail's color instead of using lineart, same thing for the line folds at the top of the skirt. Also on a side note, I don't think her toes would show if she is wearing socks/leggings <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>